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Wrote 1600 words for my first rough sketch of my essay “The Teleology of Consciousness.” Over-all, after my attempt, I have re-learned the necessity of creating a full and comprehensive and fresh outline of every single point I wish to include. While this is difficult, I can definitely at least make an effort toward an exhaustive itinerary. I should paint specific strokes while still remaining broad enough to allow spontaneity. Over-all, I think it’s important to remember that while I have thought about and written about these topics at length, what I know is not immediately available to others who have not. This, and based on the fact that I already covered a sizable portion of the information I wanted to convey in 1600 words, I can deduce from here on out that I can approach it with a bit more attention to nuance and detail. I think I should slowly build up to the grand conclusion. I think I should write at least a page after my outline describing with some ardor the main necessary points of discussion. This is an important essay for me because it will synthesize everything that I know at this point into a new thesis.